교정본
I think that electric vehicles are a good investment for environmental preservation. Cars using fossil fuels emit CO2, which causes global warming. Electric vehicles will replace those using fossil fuels as the future transportation option.
There are some reasons that green spaces are needed in cities. First off, humans are not the only living things on our planet, but others such as plants and animals, for whom green space is necessary to survive, live here. Secondly, restricting construction of concrete jungles by securing green spaces prevents unlimited development that worsens pollution.
In front of my studio apartment, there is a recycling area where I can dispose of recycling items regularly. Before putting them outside, I collect different types of items like bottles, papers, and plastics in one container until it is full enough. As I live alone and don’t generate lots of trash, I tend to put them out every two weeks.
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오늘의 노트
1. HIGHLIGHT:
Relative Pronoun ("of which" vs. "for whom"): The original sentence uses "of which," which is incorrect in this context. "Of which" is used to describe possession related to things, not people or animals. Here, "plants and animals" are living beings, so we use "whom" for the indirect object, and "for whom" correctly introduces the clause showing the purpose or benefit ("green space is necessary for them").
Word Choice ("is" vs. "live"): The original sentence ends with "is living here," which mixes singular verb "is" with the plural subject "others such as plants and animals." The corrected version uses the plural verb "live" to match the plural subject. "Live" is also in the simple present tense, which is used to state general truths or facts.
Word Form ("necessity" vs. "necessary"): The original sentence uses "necessity," which is a noun. However, "green space is their necessity" is awkward and less natural. The corrected version uses "necessary," which is an adjective, and fits correctly in the structure "green space is necessary (for them) to survive." It modifies what green space is—an essential condition.
Commas (after “animals” and “survive”): The corrected sentence adds commas to separate descriptive parts and improve readability. The comma after “animals” sets off the nonessential clause starting with “for whom.” The comma after “survive” separates the clause before returning to the main sentence.
Subject-Verb Agreement ("is living" vs. "live"): "Is living" is a present continuous form and incorrectly used with the plural subject. The corrected version uses the simple present "live," which agrees with the subject "plants and animals" and fits the general statement.
2. EXAMPLES:
- Dogs are animals, for which playtime is essential for happiness.
- Trees are plants, for which sunlight is necessary to grow.
- Birds are creatures, for whom safe nesting sites are important for raising their young.
- Fish are living beings, for whom clean water is crucial for survival.
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격식 있게
I believe that electric vehicles are a worthwhile investment for the sake of environmental preservation. Cars that operate on fossil fuels emit carbon dioxide (CO2), which contributes to global warming. Electric vehicles are expected to replace those that rely on fossil fuels as the preferred mode of transportation in the future.
There are several reasons why green spaces are essential in cities. Firstly, humans are not the only living beings on our planet; there are also plants and animals whose survival depends on green spaces. Secondly, limiting the construction of concrete developments by maintaining green spaces helps prevent uncontrolled expansion, which exacerbates pollution.
In front of my studio apartment, there is a designated recycling area where I can regularly dispose of recyclable items. Before placing them outside, I collect various types of materials, such as bottles, paper, and plastics, in one container until it is sufficiently full. Since I live alone and do not generate a significant amount of trash, I tend to recycle every two weeks.
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자연스럽게
I think electric cars are a smart choice for helping the environment. Regular cars that use gas and oil give off CO2, which makes our planet warmer. In the future, electric cars will take over and help us get around without harmful emissions.
There are plenty of reasons why cities need green spaces. First, people aren’t the only living things on Earth; plants and animals need these green areas to survive too. Also, by keeping some spaces green instead of just building concrete everywhere, we can help reduce pollution and make the city a nicer place to live.
In front of my apartment, there’s a spot where I can throw away recycling stuff. I collect different items like bottles, paper, and plastic in one bin until it’s full. Since I live alone and don’t have a ton of trash, I usually take it out every couple of weeks.
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