25.01.23 [영어/작문] Samsung's First AI Smartphone 작문

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AI makes our lives much easier than before it existed. It basically replaces humans' routine work by generating content automatically. It will be more commonly used in a variety of sectors due to its convenience.

Ethical principles should be established to prevent crimes caused by the use of AI. On top of that, related legislation to protect the copyright of creators should be implemented, as the content generated by AI is fundamentally a cloned combination of human creations.

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1. HIGHLIGHT:
Verb Form (Generative vs. Generated): The original sentence uses "generative AI makes," but "generative" is an adjective, not a verb. The corrected version uses "generated by AI," which correctly forms a past participle to describe the content produced by AI.

Adjective Form (Fundamently vs. Fundamentally): The word "fundamently" is a misspelling. The correct form is "fundamentally," which is the proper adverb used to describe the nature of the cloned combination.

Noun Choice (Creature vs. Creations): The word "creature" refers to a living being, often used in a biological or mythical sense. The corrected sentence uses "creations," which is the appropriate noun to refer to works or products created by humans, like art or ideas.

Comma (Before "as"): The original sentence is missing a comma before "as." In English, when you introduce a reason or explanation with "as," it's common to use a comma to separate the clauses. The corrected version adds the comma for clarity.


2. EXAMPLES:
   - On top of that, related legislation to protect the copyright of creators should be implemented, as the content generated by AI is fundamentally a cloned combination of human creations.
   - The content created by the artist is unique and valuable.
   - It is important to respect the copyright of original works.
   - Generative AI can produce interesting content based on existing ideas.
   - Human creations inspire many new technologies and innovations.

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격식 있게

Artificial Intelligence (AI) simplifies our lives compared to the time before its existence. It effectively automates routine tasks by generating content automatically. Its convenience will lead to more widespread usage across various sectors.

To prepare for the impact of AI on society, it is essential to establish ethical principles to prevent crimes associated with its use. Furthermore, legislation should be enacted to protect the copyright of creators, as the content generated by AI is essentially a reconfiguration of human-created works.

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자연스럽게

I think AI actually makes life a lot easier! Since it showed up, it takes care of boring tasks by making stuff automatically. It's gonna be everywhere in different areas because it's so handy!

We should set some rules to make sure AI doesn’t cause any problems or crimes. Plus, we need to have laws to protect the rights of creators because the stuff AI makes is kinda like a mix of what people already created.