25.03.18 [영어/작문] SK Peoples' Reactions to the GTX-A Line 작문

교정본

I commute to my office by an hour-long subway every day. Even though I live in Seoul City, the neighborhood near the office is far from my place. Hence, I consider moving to nearby places from my company from time to time.

The malicious weather conditions, especially snow and rain, result in postponed arrival times for public transportation during commuting. The reason this happens is that most commuters who have cars leave them in the parking lots because of the weather outside. As the crowd waiting for the subway or bus doesn’t fit within the acceptable passenger count, every single transportation schedule arrives with accumulating delays caused by passengers trying to board.

If I shorten my commute time, I could secure more leisure time after my office hours. I’d like to use that time to develop my language skills and work capabilities.

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오늘의 노트

1. HIGHLIGHT:  
The phrase "by hour-long" is missing the article "an," which is needed to correctly specify the duration in a single unit of time.

2. EXAMPLES:  
- The meeting lasted by an hour-long.  
- They traveled by an hour-long train ride.  
- She studied by an hour-long session every day.  

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격식 있게

I commute to my office using a subway that takes one hour every day. Although I live in Seoul City, the neighborhood near my office is quite far from my home. Therefore, I occasionally consider moving to a location closer to my workplace.

Adverse weather conditions, particularly snow and rain, lead to delays in public transportation during my commute. This occurs because many commuters who own cars prefer to leave them in parking lots due to the inclement weather. As a result, the crowd waiting for the subway or bus often exceeds the acceptable passenger capacity, causing each transportation service to experience increasing delays as passengers attempt to board.

If I were to reduce my commuting time, I could gain more leisure time after my work hours. I would like to utilize that time to enhance my language skills and professional capabilities.

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자연스럽게

I take the subway to my office every day, and it takes about an hour. Even though I live in Seoul, my office is pretty far from my place. Because of this, I sometimes think about moving closer to work.

The weather can be pretty nasty, especially when it snows or rains, which makes public transport run late. This happens because a lot of people with cars don’t drive and just leave them in the parking lot, choosing to take the subway or bus instead. So, the crowd of people waiting can get really big, which leads to delayed trains and buses since everyone is trying to squeeze on.

If I could cut down on my commute, I’d have more free time during the day. I want to use that time to improve my language skills and work abilities.