25.05.02 [영어/작문] Emergency Mental Support 작문

교정본

I went through COVID-19, which caused many changes in my life at the time. As I had just graduated from university and was looking for a job, I felt anxious because of the limited job opportunities caused by the environmental restrictions during the pandemic.

Since typhoons commonly hit Korea from July to October, people should prepare to minimize potential damage. For instance, we have to stay at home to avoid injuries from objects blown around by strong winds. Additionally, taping windows in an X shape can help prevent them from shattering because of the wind.

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격식 있게

I experienced the COVID-19 pandemic, which brought about many changes in my life at that time. Having just graduated from university and searching for a job, I felt anxious due to the limited employment opportunities resulting from the restrictions imposed during the pandemic.

In Korea, typhoons typically occur from July to October, and it is essential for people to prepare in order to minimize potential damage. For example, it is advisable to stay indoors to avoid injuries from objects that may be blown around by strong winds. Additionally, applying tape to windows in an X shape can help prevent them from shattering due to the wind.

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자연스럽게

I went through COVID-19, and it really changed a lot in my life. I had just finished university and was searching for a job, which made me pretty anxious since there weren’t many job options because of all the restrictions during the pandemic.

Also, in Korea, typhoons usually strike from July to October, so it's super important to get ready to avoid damage. For example, we should stay indoors to keep safe from things being blown around by the strong winds. And taping our windows in an X shape can help stop them from breaking because of the wind.