25.05.07 [영어/작문] Defying Expectations in Miss Universe 작문

교정본

Kinds of beauty differ according to which perspective I take when perceiving others. Regardless of the elements of beauty, I strive to perceive other people’s inner beauty as well as their appearance. However, I acknowledge that I can’t ignore the first impression when I get to know others based on my personal experience.

As I experienced foreign countries and had relationships with people in those, I could broaden my perceptions regarding beauty with a wide spectrum of cultural contexts. Now that I view differences in appearance between many races, I always try to judge others’ appearance not based on the a biased perspective.

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격식 있게

The concept of beauty varies depending on the perspective from which I perceive others. While I recognize the importance of outward appearance, I also strive to appreciate and value the inner beauty of individuals. However, I acknowledge that first impressions often influence my initial perception, based on my personal experiences.

Through my travels abroad and interactions with people from different cultures, I have expanded my understanding of beauty, considering a wide range of cultural contexts. As I observe the differences in appearance across various races, I make a conscious effort to avoid judging others based on biased or superficial viewpoints.

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자연스럽게

Beauty can look different depending on how I see people. I try to focus not only on how people look on the outside but also on their inner qualities. That said, I admit that my first impression of someone still matters, based on my own experiences.

Having traveled to different countries and met people from all over, I’ve learned to see beauty from a wider cultural perspective. Now, when I see people from different races, I try not to judge based on looks or hold any biased views.