24.06.17 [영어/작문] Internal Messenger

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I have been using Slack in my office, and it appears to be quite useful. So I’d like to explain a feature of Slack that turns out to be exclusive. It can be connected flexibly to any feature of the company’s internal system. For example, when someone completes their commute to the office, Slack automatically informs others of the status of their arrival on a channel.

What I like the most among messaging apps is Kakao. This is mainly because I can use a variety of features through Kakao, such as payment, shopping, and reservations. The expandability of features is so stunning that I make use of them every second of my daily life. Kakao is even developing new features besides the existing ones. They have changed people’s ordinary lives and will continue to do the same with further development.

I used to learn new software when I was supposed to analyze data while working on some projects as an alumnus of a data analysis boot camp. What’s important is to utilize each feature practically without any pressure to do it perfectly. I was bound to practice the software repeatedly, and eventually, I became good at handling it.

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I have been using Slack at my workplace, and I find it to be very beneficial. I would like to explain a unique feature of Slack that allows for flexible integration with various aspects of the company's internal system. For instance, once someone finishes their commute to the office, Slack automatically notifies others about their arrival status on a specific channel.

One messaging app that I particularly favor is Kakao. This is primarily because I can access a wide range of functions through Kakao, including making payments, shopping, and booking reservations. The extensive range of features is incredibly impressive, and I utilize them throughout my daily life. Kakao is continuously introducing new features in addition to the existing ones. These features have revolutionized people's daily routines and will continue to do so with further advancements.

In the past, I learned new software to analyze data while working on projects as a graduate of a data analysis boot camp. The key is to effectively utilize each feature practically without feeling pressured to be perfect. Through consistent practice with the software, I eventually became proficient in managing it.

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I've been using Slack at work, and it's really helpful. Let me tell you about one cool thing about Slack that stands out. It can easily connect to different parts of the company's internal system. For instance, when someone arrives at the office, Slack automatically lets everyone know on a channel.

My favorite messaging app is Kakao. I love it because I can do a lot of things with it like pay for stuff, shop, and make reservations. The range of things you can do with it is amazing, and I use it all the time in my day-to-day life. Kakao keeps adding new features to make people's lives better and will keep improving.

I used to learn new software to analyze data for projects back when I was at a data analysis boot camp. The key is to use each feature practically without worrying about being perfect. I practiced using the software a lot, and over time, I got really good at it.