24.07.01 [영어/작문] Teamwork

교정본

Teamwork is crucial to accomplish a significant result in a project. When we harmonize as a team to the fullest, this cooperation will result in a distinguishing achievement. I believe that the more effort we contribute as a member, the further step we can approach as a team while processing an undertaking.

As I am still at the entry level of my career, I usually take on a tiny role in supporting my team. However, my personality is outgoing, so I lead the atmosphere to be more friendly and active in a team when taking an assignment.

I’d like to be assigned to a team where it realizes the added value of a team setting. The only unequaled member never maximizes the harmonious cooperation. You should put away the ego if you were to join a team that pursues joint goals strongly. When we go beyond the ego to combine personal value with the team’s goal, we will obtain a win-win result both as an individual and as a group.

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격식 있게

Teamwork plays a crucial role in achieving significant results in a project. When we work together harmoniously as a team, this collaboration leads to remarkable accomplishments. I strongly believe that the more effort each team member contributes, the closer we can come to success as a team while working on a project.

Although I am at the beginning of my career, I often take on a small role in supporting my team. My outgoing personality helps create a friendly and active atmosphere within the team when working on assignments.

I prefer to be part of a team that values the benefits of teamwork. A single member working alone cannot fully realize the benefits of collaborative efforts. It is essential to set aside personal egos when joining a team that is dedicated to achieving common goals. By transcending personal interests and aligning them with the team's objectives, we can achieve mutually beneficial outcomes for both individuals and the group.

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자연스럽게

Teamwork is really important to get great results in a project. When we work well together as a team, we achieve something special. I think the more we work hard as team players, the closer we get to success.

I'm just starting out in my career, so I usually have a small role in helping my team. But I'm friendly and outgoing, so I try to make the team atmosphere positive and lively when we're working on something.

I prefer to be in a team that values working together. One person alone can't achieve as much as a united team. It's important to leave your ego behind and focus on team goals if you want to be part of a team that aims high. When we prioritize team goals over individual interests, we all win in the end.