24.07.15 [영어/작문] Bucket List

교정본

First, I hope to visit Spain again, especially where I lived when I was an exchange student. Second, I wish to obtain a master's degree in one of the European countries. Last but not least, I dream of living in Spain or Germany.

Since I lived in Spain as an exchange student, I have aspired to visit there again to reminisce about my youthful and carefree vibe back then. The end of the year is the time to finally visit Malaga, where I lived.

Also, I dream of obtaining a master's degree in data analysis in one of the European countries where tuition is low or free. Then, I will apply for a student visa and aim to secure employment there to settle permanently. I believe the culture there suits me well, which is enough reason for me to decide where to live.

Back then, I was enthusiastic about seizing the opportunity to live in Spain as an exchange student, which was a top priority on my bucket list at that time. So I worked part-time in a fast food restaurant near my university to save money for the exchange program. Moreover, I applied to the program and had an interview with the relevant institution. I have never regretted visiting Spain, and it remains a memorable moment among all my experiences.

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격식 있게

Firstly, I hope to revisit Spain, especially the place where I resided when I was an exchange student. Secondly, I aim to pursue a master's degree in one of the European countries. Lastly, I dream of residing in Spain or Germany.

Having lived in Spain as an exchange student, I have longed to return there to reminisce about the carefree days of my youth. The end of the year seems like the perfect time to visit Malaga, my previous place of residence.

Moreover, I aspire to obtain a master's degree in Data Analysis in a European country where tuition fees are low or free. Subsequently, I intend to apply for a student visa and seek employment to establish permanent residency there. I firmly believe that the local culture aligns well with my preferences, making it a crucial factor in choosing my future home.

During my time as an exchange student in Spain, I was eager to fulfill my goal of living there, which was a top priority on my bucket list. Therefore, I undertook part-time work at a fast-food restaurant near my university to save money for the exchange program. Additionally, I submitted my application for the program and underwent an interview with the relevant institution. Visiting Spain has been a decision I have never regretted and stands out as a cherished memory among all my travels.

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자연스럽게

I wanna go back to Spain where I lived during my student exchange program. I miss that time. I also wanna get a master's degree in Europe and perhaps live in Spain or Germany someday.

When I was in Spain, I had so much fun! So, I wanna revisit Malaga, where I stayed. It's where I wanna go before the year ends.

My big dream is to study Data Analysis for my master's in a country where it's not too expensive. Then, I wanna find a job there and live there forever. I think the culture there suits me well.

When I was in college, I really wanted to do a student exchange in Spain. It was a big deal for me. I even worked at a fast-food place to save money for the program. I did the interviews and paperwork, and it was totally worth it! Spain has been my favorite place to visit so far.