24.08.16 [영어/작문] Friendship

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When I was in my teens, I could only make friends at school or academies. And I thought that only people my age could be my friends. My relationships were limited to people whose backgrounds were the same as mine. However, nowadays, I try to form relationships with people of diverse ages and backgrounds that are different from mine. I’ve become more open-minded in my adulthood, seeking inspiration from others.

Societal expectations do influence adults' willingness to make new friends. Let’s say that we are going to attend a social gathering for a networking purpose with new people who work in the same industry. In that case, the attendees should make an effort to connect with others, actively pursuing beneficial networking. At times, adults are compelled to make new friends because of societal pressures created by social contexts.

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In my teenage years, I used to mainly make friends at school or academies and believed that only individuals of my age group could be my companions. My social circle was confined to those who shared similar backgrounds as mine. However, presently, I endeavor to establish connections with people of various ages and diverse backgrounds. I have grown more receptive in my adulthood, drawing inspiration from others.

The expectations imposed by society can significantly impact the readiness of adults to build new friendships. For instance, imagine we are attending a social event for networking with new individuals in the same industry. It is essential for the participants to make an active effort to engage with others, actively seeking beneficial connections. Occasionally, adults feel compelled to forge new friendships due to societal expectations influenced by the social environment.

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When I was younger, I could only make friends at school or classes. I used to think that only people my age could be my buddies, and I mainly hung out with people similar to me. But nowadays, I try to be friends with people of all ages and different backgrounds. As I've gotten older, I've become more open-minded and enjoy learning from others.

The pressures of society can impact adults' willingness to make new friends. Imagine we're going to a networking event with new people who work in the same field as us. During such events, it's important to reach out and network with others actively. Sometimes adults feel pressured to make new friends because of societal expectations in certain social settings.