24.10.29 [영어/작문] Favorite Performance 작문

원본

My all-time favorite performance is the concert of singers. Though I’m willing to watch concerts of artists I like, I can’t reserve the ticket on a regular basis due to budget issues. If my salary coverage extends more in the future, I wish to have a paying capability for any sort of concert tickets.

When I lived in Spain as an international student, I used to pass through the main street, La Calle Larios. In the middle of walking the road, there were busking bands at any time. They attracted me whenever I admired the performance of genres such as rock, and pop.

I felt freedom while watching the performances on the street because it looked like a stage not limited to a specific place. Since I hadn’t seen a busking performance frequently in Korea, the atmosphere was exotic, and this made me perceive my status of being an international student. Overall, I loved those feelings and thoughts I had at that time.

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격식 있게

My all-time favorite type of performance is concerts by singers. Although I’m always eager to attend concerts by artists I like, I can’t buy tickets regularly due to budget constraints. If my salary increases in the future, I hope to have the financial freedom to attend any concert I want.

When I lived in Spain as an international student, I used to pass through the main street, La Calle Larios. While walking along the road, I would encounter busking bands at various times. Their performances always captivated me, especially when they played genres like rock and pop.

Watching these street performances made me feel a sense of freedom, as the entire street felt like an open stage without boundaries. Since busking performances are rare in Korea, the atmosphere felt exotic, reminding me of my unique experience as an international student. Overall, I loved the feelings and thoughts that came to me during that time.

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자연스럽게

My favorite type of performance ever is singer concerts. I always love going to concerts of artists I like, but I can't go regularly because of money. If I earn more in the future, I want to be able to go to any concert I fancy.

When I was in Spain as a student from another country, I used to walk down the main street, La Calle Larios. I often saw busking bands playing along the street. I really enjoyed their shows, especially when they played rock and pop music.

Seeing these street performances made me feel free, like the whole street was a stage without limits. Since busking is not common in Korea, it felt special and reminded me of my time as a foreign student. I really enjoyed the feelings and memories from that period.